Rising Tied
This is my first serious shot at writing a poem(song, whatever). I got the idea from the hip-hop song "Petrified" from Mike Shinoda's side project The Rising Tied. I liked the rhyme in the song. This has nothing to do with them. It's all my own stuff.
Go!
Rising Tied
I'm rising tied,
As I rose, I vied;
Through the mist,
With a fist,
'N nothing in me!
The nothingness,
The foolishness,
The emptyness,
Acrimoniousness.
I'm rising tied,
As I rose, I cried;
No tears, no dears,
Sweat in my ear,
And even more fear!
No chance, no oppurtunity,
Time not in scarcity.
Future in front of me,
I want to get of me!
I'm rising tied,
So hard, I tried.
I wanna survive,
Let the bastards die!
I'm rising tied,
With the rising tide.
I'm being tided by time,
D'ya like my rhyme?
I'll break the bond,
I won't despond,
And I will survive,
In this world so wide.
Never to fall.
Yes! I've heard my call!
5 drops:
great work!
I wonder everytime i sit back to write a poem..I've never been able to think beyond cricket :P
I remeber two years back I wrote one[not on cricket] which ended up like this :-
if you are strong from heart and soul.
none can stop u to reach ur goal.
msg conveyed..good luck for the upcoming exams.
Here's a lil part of the song "Higher Ground"
No one can ever bring me down,
Till I reach the highest ground.
You could write poems on cricket:
Sachin batted like hell,
And yes! The Pakistanis fell!
(I don't follow cricket, but I heard he got booes from the crowd. I wonder if he had boos(z)ed?)
good poetry
u shud write more
and tap that hidden? talent
Thanks guys! I had such fun writing that poem. Before this I thought that poems were a pile of crap. But they're so fun!
hate to break it to you, but it sucks.
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